Just written a song for my sweet sister on her Birthday
Let me know how is it?
She is out of town.Should I send this song to her
Is it ok or not??
My first ever song on YouTube
I don’t know how to use any instrument and all 
So just written and sing 
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Yaah Mene kuchh nahi kiya jyada
Bass likha aur GA liya
Will add all these next time 
Well sung 
add some background music. And it will perfect if u add some slides/image too like what original said
Thanxx
Coming to the song..Sounds like nasal to me..Atif Aslam ya Arijit Singh alike..
U sure this is how u sing usually? Record again without that nasal effect
Will take care next time
Song lyrics- very good…
Song raaga- very good…
Missing music…… But still good….
Thanks
Excellent Song without any instruments 
Thanks
Good try just make it more emotional with some pictures 
Yaah will try better next time
Its nice. Sweet and simple. I dint had thought of music requirement. You can make video with pics of both of u.
Yaah I too thought to share pics
But scared whether my sister like it or not
Still hadn’t told her that I wrong a song for her
If it was sung by mouth instead of nose, it would have been better. Lyrics is good.
Bro thora gala kharab tha
Happy Rakshabandhan
Listened your song, one suggestion >> add emotions while your sing.
You may also add some good pictures(bhai-behna) with slideshow >> add cartoons and all that