Just written a song for my sweet sister on her ...

Just written a song for my sweet sister on her Birthday

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Let me know how is it?
She is out of town.Should I send this song to her
Is it ok or not??
My first ever song on YouTube

I don’t know how to use any instrument and all sad
So just written and sing lol

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smile laughing

Listened your song, one suggestion >> add emotions while your sing.

You may also add some good pictures(bhai-behna) with slideshow >> add cartoons and all that biggrin


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Well sung grinning add some background music. And it will perfect if u add some slides/image too like what original said

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Original wrote:
smile laughing

Listened your song, one suggestion >> add emotions while your sing.

You may also add some good pictures(bhai-behna) with slideshow >> add cartoons and all that biggrin


Yaah Mene kuchh nahi kiya jyada
Bass likha aur GA liya lol
Will add all these next time smile

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Imharsh wrote:

Well sung grinning add some background music. And it will perfect if u add some slides/image too like what original said

Thanxx

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bbonus wrote:

Bass likha air GA liya lol

GA reminds me of group alert wink

btw … real good song smile

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Saikcw wrote:

GA reminds me of group alert wink

btw … real good song smile

Thanks bro smile

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Good

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wL-jhZhy wrote:

Good

Thank you smile

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Coming to the song..Sounds like nasal to me..Atif Aslam ya Arijit Singh alike..
U sure this is how u sing usually? Record again without that nasal effect

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Song lyrics- very good…
Song raaga- very good…
Missing music…… But still good….

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co0l1992 wrote:

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Coming to the song..Sounds like nasal to me..Atif Aslam ya Arijit Singh alike..
U sure this is how u sing usually? Record again without that nasal effect

Will take care next time

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sam-1 wrote:

Song lyrics- very good…
Song raaga- very good…
Missing music…… But still good….

Thanks

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Excellent Song without any instruments plus1

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Good try just make it more emotional with some pictures couple

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syed786 wrote:

Excellent Song without any instruments plus1

Thanks

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CR7 wrote:

Good try just make it more emotional with some pictures couple

Yaah will try better next time smile

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Its nice. Sweet and simple. I dint had thought of music requirement. You can make video with pics of both of u. smile

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devashi wrote:

Its nice. Sweet and simple. I dint had thought of music requirement. You can make video with pics of both of u. smile

Yaah I too thought to share pics
But scared whether my sister like it or not
Still hadn’t told her that I wrong a song for her sad

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If it was sung by mouth instead of nose, it would have been better. Lyrics is good.

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weed wrote:

If it was sung by mouth instead of nose, it would have been better. Lyrics is good.

Bro thora gala kharab tha sad

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bbonus wrote:

Bro thora gala kharab tha sad

bhej de. kaun sa gaali degi. de bhi degi to aadat to hai hi toungueout

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weed wrote:

bhej de. kaun sa gaali degi. de bhi degi to aadat to hai hi toungueout

Nahi Bhai
Ab to ache se gakar
Thora picture add karke
Phir hi bataunga usse

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devashi wrote:

Its nice. Sweet and simple. I dint had thought of music requirement. You can make video with pics of both of u. smile

Behan ki feelings.

@bbonus Dont be @bnasal

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Very nice bro

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😢 nice yaar

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shin_chan wrote:

Very nice bro

Thanks bro smile

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Batraji wrote:

😢 nice yaar

Thanxx

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Happy Rakshabandhan

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