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PandeModium Part:1

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This is my  frustrations and anger expressed through my pen. You can call it poetry and a Rap song.




PandeModium part:1

Pandemonium
It’s pandemonium,
It’s pandeModium.



Let’s Pour H2O
On some pure sodium.
Time to Raise the STAKES;
And lower each podium. 🎙️




Thali Bhajai Humne
Diya bhi jalai thi
“Go Corona Go” chilla ke
Catchy Slogan bhi  chalai thi.
Pandemic mein sabne milke
Dark Diwali bhi Manai thi.




Abh  Upar se
dikhe Diya Naa,
Dikhe Chitao ki Aag ye 🕯️;
Akhir mein bachta Kya?
Ek kabra ya kuch Raakh Hai.




Jab Super Blind faan fever ho
Tab Electric chair bhi
Laage Ferrari ya Lambo.
COVID wala  fever ho
Toh woh bole:
“Mujhko kaise Hua!!!
F@#&#@k, Damn bro.”




Cylinder se hum
Sans bhaare
Woh CARES Ko Bhi
privately Cash kare,
“Essential” work hai
Toh ✔️ Vista  phir bhi
Naa Crash kare.
Kuch Baane Ash;
Aur kuch Aish kare.




COVID bole:
I’m no 56" Fat Cat 🐈
I’m a F*@#king Fire fire Typhoon 🌀
Good, Bad or ugly evil….
Young, old;
piss-poor, Madcaps,
Except most Billionaire Tycoons,
Now None can Escape ME,
Even If they TRY TO…


To be continued….


                   -—  by  -Total_Fun

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Deal Subedar Deal Subedar
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Good work..
Thanks for sharing..

Tech Guru Tech Guru
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Good poetry. But electric chair me baithne kaa experience nai. 😁

Sale Day King Sale Day King
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Good one @Total_Fun
I have another one in Hindi which suits current situation perfectly

शरीर पे काटा आ जाता है ये पढ़ते वक्त.
गुजराती कवयित्री पारुल खक्कर जी की ये कविता ह्रदयद्रावक है और मन को नि:शब्दता, सुन्न कर देती है
ऐसा सारा आकाश अपनो पे आक्रमण कर रहा है और हम केवळ हतबल और निशब्द…..

● नंगा साहेब
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एक साथ सब मुर्दे बोले ‘सब कुछ चंगा-चंगा’
साहेब तुम्हारे रामराज में शव-वाहिनी गंगा

ख़त्म हुए शमशान तुम्हारे, ख़त्म काष्ठ की बोरी
थके हमारे कंधे सारे, आँखें रह गई कोरी
दर-दर जाकर यमदूत खेले
मौत का नाच बेढंगा

साहेब तुम्हारे रामराज में शव-वाहिनी गंगा

नित लगातार जलती चिताएँ
राहत माँगे पलभर
नित लगातार टूटे चूड़ियाँ
कुटती छाति घर घर
देख लपटों को फ़िडल बजाते वाह रे ‘बिल्ला-रंगा’

साहेब तुम्हारे रामराज में शव-वाहिनी गंगा

साहेब तुम्हारे दिव्य वस्त्र, दैदीप्य तुम्हारी ज्योति
काश असलियत लोग समझते, हो तुम पत्थर, ना मोती
हो हिम्मत तो आके बोलो
‘मेरा साहेब नंगा’

साहेब तुम्हारे रामराज में शव-वाहिनी गंगा

Tech Guru Tech Guru
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Meri Hindi ki Gyan zyda achhi nehi hai. Toh dhire dhire meine pura pada. Unki Kavita mere dilko chhu gayi.

Thanks bhai for sharing. pray

Deal Subedar Deal Subedar
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Great job
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Deal Major Deal Major
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good one

Entertainer Entertainer
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👍

Critic Critic
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Good effort, correctly describes the current situation.

Helpful Helpful
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“I met a traveller from an antique land, Who said—“Two vast and trunkless legs of stone

Stand in the desert. . . . Near them, on the sand,

Half sunk a shattered visage lies, whose frown,

And wrinkled lip, and sneer of cold command,

Tell that its sculptor well those passions read

Which yet survive, stamped on these lifeless things,

The hand that mocked them, and the heart that fed;

And on the pedestal, these words appear:

My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings; Look on my Works, ye Mighty, and despair!

Nothing beside remains. Round the decay Of that colossal Wreck, boundless and bare The lone and level sands stretch far away.”

Ozymandias BY PERCY BYSSHE SHELLEY

Tech Guru Tech Guru
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Beautiful. I couldn’t have imagined a Better poem to express the underlying message elegantly.


“In Impermanence I trust.”
- Marty Rubin

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Eagerly awaiting your second part bro.. @Total_Fun plus1 sunglasses

Super Stud Super Stud
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Subscription lena padega aab 😅😅😅 trial period over😅

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Tech Guru Tech Guru
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…written in poor taste…. Guys hold restraint…. Don’t get inspired by me to write whatever you want to… 🙏🙏🙏

@MJ911 @bumblefoot
Maybe a political n social thread. 🙂

Tech Guru Tech Guru
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Don’t be like that. I liked most of that.

It seemed like it could lead to a healthy discussion. But through poems

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Benevolent Benevolent
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Great going mate…
I loved the flow…After a long time i read something so refreshing mate smile
HA+KG sunglasses
#AA_JJ wink

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